St John of God Bunbury Hospital is within the scope of WikiProject Australia, which aims to improve Wikipedia's coverage of Australia and Australia-related topics. If you would like to participate, visit the project page.AustraliaWikipedia:WikiProject AustraliaTemplate:WikiProject AustraliaAustralia articles
This article is within the scope of WikiProject Hospitals, a collaborative effort to improve the coverage of Hospitals on Wikipedia. If you would like to participate, please visit the project page, where you can join the discussion and see a list of open tasks.HospitalsWikipedia:WikiProject HospitalsTemplate:WikiProject HospitalsHospital articles
This article is within the scope of WikiProject Western Australia South West, a collaborative effort to improve the coverage of the South West on Wikipedia. If you would like to participate, please visit the project page, where you can join the discussion and see a list of open tasks.Western Australia South WestWikipedia:WikiProject Western Australia South WestTemplate:WikiProject Western Australia South WestWestern Australia South West articles
The Wikimedia Foundation's Terms of Use require that editors disclose their "employer, client, and affiliation" with respect to any paid contribution; see WP:PAID. For advice about reviewing paid contributions, see WP:COIRESPONSE.
Part of an edit requested by an editor with a conflict of interest has been implemented.
Update reference to St John of God Health Care to read: St John of God Health Care is one of the largest Catholic providers of health care services in Australia.[1]
say that the construction of the new part of hte hospital is complete.
Hi AnneGartner. Thank you for your suggestions. I am declining the first edit request for two reasons. First, the claim that your hospital network is the largest in Australia needs to supported by an independent source. I can't just take your organization's word for it. Second, labeling a hospital network the "largest" is vague and ambiguous. St John could be the largest by hospital beds, by expenditures, or by number of doctors; but the point is, Wikipedia articles should avoid using vaguely positive terms when more specific descriptions would do better.
Your second edit request is Done. Although you did not provide a citation, I was able to find one for you. Best, Altamel (talk) 19:07, 5 June 2020 (UTC)[reply]
Talk page watchers, please see a relevant discussion at WP:COIN. Altamel (talk) 19:07, 5 June 2020 (UTC)[reply]
.svg){kind=logo}
Done. Although you did not provide a citation, I was able to find one for you. Best, Altamel (talk) 19:07, 5 June 2020 (UTC)
